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ATWOOD - "A Toiler's Weird Odyssey of Deliverance" -AVAILABLE
NOW FOR KINDLE (INCLUDING KINDLE COMPUTER APPS) FROM
AMAZON.COM. Use
this link.
CCJ Publisher Rick Alan Rice dissects
the building of America in a trilogy of novels
collectively calledATWOOD. Book One explores
the development of the American West through the
lens of public policy, land planning, municipal
development, and governance as it played out in one
of the new counties of Kansas in the latter half of
the 19th Century. The novel focuses on the religious
and cultural traditions that imbued the American
Midwest with a special character that continues to
have a profound effect on American politics to this
day. Book One creates an understanding about
America's cultural foundations that is further
explored in books two and three that further trace
the historical-cultural-spiritual development of one
isolated county on the Great Plains that stands as
an icon in the development of a certain brand of
American character. That's the serious stuff viewed
from high altitude. The story itself gets down and
dirty with the supernatural, which in ATWOOD
- A Toiler's Weird Odyssey of Deliveranceis the
outfall of misfires in human interactions, from the
monumental to the sublime. The
book features the epic poem "The
Toiler" as
well as artwork by New Mexico artist Richard
Padilla.
Elmore Leonard
Meets Larry McMurtry
Western Crime
Novel

I am offering another
novel through Amazon's Kindle Direct Publishing service.
Cooksin is the story of a criminal syndicate that sets its
sights on a ranching/farming community in Weld County, Colorado,
1950. The perpetrators of the criminal enterprise steal farm
equipment, slaughter cattle, and rob the personal property of
individuals whose assets have been inventoried in advance and
distributed through a vast system of illegal commerce.
It is a ripping good yarn, filled
with suspense and intrigue. This was designed intentionally to
pay homage to the type of creative works being produced in 1950,
when the story is set. Richard Padilla
has done his usually brilliant work in capturing the look and feel of
a certain type of crime fiction being produced in that era. The
whole thing has the feel of those black & white films you see on
Turner Movie Classics, and the writing will remind you a little
of Elmore Leonard, whose earliest works were westerns.
Use this link.
EXPLORE THE KINDLE
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If you have not explored the books
available from Amazon.com's Kindle Publishing
division you would do yourself a favor to do so. You
will find classic literature there, as well as tons
of privately published books of every kind. A lot of
it is awful, like a lot of traditionally published
books are awful, but some are truly classics. You
can get the entire collection of Shakespeare's works
for two bucks.
You do not need to buy a Kindle to
take advantage of this low-cost library. Use
this link to go to an Amazon.com page from which you
can download for free a Kindle App for
your computer, tablet, or phone.
Amazon is the largest,
but far from the only digital publisher. You can
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FILMMAKING FACTOIDS
If you are a filmmaker there is a pretty good chance that you belong to the
Stage 32 site. You can find me at
https://www.stage32.com/profile/40724 . The site has a large group of users
and contributors and they produce many blogs and webinars providing information
useful to the independent filmmaker. The items below are synopses of some of
what has shown up on that site recently, though it is updated constantly. This
is sort of fun reading even if you aren't an aspiring filmmaker.
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Film Insurance
Are you buying insurance coverage for your independent film? Are you doing
anything that might be considered hazardous? Stunts of any kind? You might want
to get smart to Workers Compensation
Insurance. In fact, did you know there is such a thing as Reality Television and
Participant Insurance? You can by short term or annual. And are you covered for
Errors & Omissions? How about your material use rights? And once you have made
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Casting Name Talent
Independent filmmakers gain legitimacy for their work by casting well-known
actors. It usually starts with an agent getting a script to some known actor.
Letters of Intent and Letters of Commitment are produced and offers are pieced
together. Filmmakers often make multiple offers for the same role, and
agreements negotiated around the how/when/under what conditions of making the
film impact who finally gets the deal. Some actors work on "Pay or Play" offers,
meaning they are guaranteed remuneration if they are released from the contract
through no fault of their own. Some may work for deferred payments, or even just
for screen credit. Some may demand "Back-end Points", meaning they'll take a
percentage of the film's gross or net profits. Some require special treatment,
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Narrative Theme
Films are almost always explorations of the human
experience, on some level, aimed at revealing something
about the natures of the characters in the play.
Screenwriters spend a lot of time trying to figure out how
to leverage their narrative theme, and they think in terms
of three act plays. They usually start with a central
question that their script intends to explore, like "how
does a traumatic experience in youth impact one later in
life?" That works as a premise to a deeper theme, like
"finding inner peace through forgiveness." Screenwriters
will introduce and articulate the theme in the first act,
demonstrate it in the second, develop a new element of the
theme in the middle of the story, challenge the thematic
question near the end of the second act, and then answer the
thematic question with the climax of the work.
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Film Deliverables
Once your film is produced, you need the following products to get your film
to market (either through festival, theater, or VOD): Apple ProRes 422 HQ master
source file with frame rate and resolution specs and in the appropriate mono or
stereo format; DVD/Blu-ray Copies; Closed Captioning, mandatory for VOD
platforms; Subtitling for foreign markets; Timecoded transcript for creating and
protecting against errors in subtitles and captioning, required for foreign
sales; Music Cue Sheet, listing songs used in the film with duration, composer,
title and in-and-out cues, required for subscription platforms like Netflix;
Music License Materials so your film can be exhibited; Metadata listing cast and
crew, a synopsis, a logline. |
Lighting Techniques
Cinematography is all about capturing light, making light sources critical
elements in the filmmaking process. There are several ways to light a scene.
Natural lighting outdoors is the least expensive option, but the filmmaker gives
up some control over the positioning of subjects. Indoors, lamps can be
positioned to advantage. Light can be bounced from a white surface to fill in
shadows on a subject's face. Conversely, a black bed sheet can be used to cut
light for a negative fill to add contrast. Household Items like China ball
lanterns can provide even, soft light. Floor and table lamps highlight specific
areas in a scene and pull double duty on camera as part of the set. Flood Lights
or shop lights will provide harsh shadows, or can be bounced for softer light.
LED fixtures are light, portable, and less hazardous, plus they run off
batteries. |
Pre-Production
The success of your film begins with good pre-production
work. The choices you make in pre-production largely
determine the visual language of your film. You will be
choosing your camera and doing location scouting, and then
you will develop lookbooks, shot lists and camera/lighting
overheads. |
Film Scoring
Film composer Russ Whitelock recently published a blog post on Stage 32 in
which he recounted things he had learned in scoring a film in four weeks. You
can make a short 4-6 week deadline by scoring five minutes of film per day.
Float ideas. Write "temporary theme" music to review with the director to
determine if it captures the feeling the director intends, and then writes
alternatives. Don't over-use the theme in your score, audiences will notice and
grow to hate it. The way your composition is mixed is more important than
anything else, so plan to spend more time on getting the mix right than you did
in composing the score. |
Scene Descriptions
Screenplays are highly technical documents in that their audiences - film
directors - consume them with the expectation of getting specific types of
information from specific parts of the script. Scene descriptions are where
directors and visual designers get huge amounts of the information they will use
to set up their shots and shoot their scenes. The tone is set in the scene
description. It is where the script conveys humor, terror, or suspense. The
crafting of character introductions is critical, because here the writer conveys
the first impressions of a character. The reader should know what kind of
character this is before his or her first line is ever spoken. The scene
description provides point of view information that suggests camera angles
(though not explicitly, as would a shooting script). |
Tips for Networking
Never make conversations about you. Ask the person you
are speaking with to talk about themselves. Ask them
questions. The people you target in your network know that
they are being pitched, just like they are all day every
day. Don't tell them you are a writer, they suspect that is
probably the case. They will let you know if they want to
give you an opening to talk about your product, and when
they do you need to know what to say. Practice your pitch so
that you are telling your story in a concise and authentic
way. As with any client relationship, serve the listener so
that they feel that they are engaging with you as much as
they are the product you are selling. It is a confidence
game. They need to have confidence in you, so be real. |
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Publicizing a Film
Don't wait until post-production to start publicizing your film. Use social
media to start building an audience early. Develop a marketing and media plan
and start creating buzz. Educate yourself in the process of publicizing product
to know how to effectively work with paid publicists. They will know how to
effectively develop and use your publicity budget and they may help you gain
additional funding. They can support crowdfunding campaigns with marketing, and
they can place product and identify co-marketing opportunities. They can help
you refine your materials to attract investors and distributors. Activate the
social media resources of your cast and crew. Get them talking about the
project. Capture the behind-the-scenes story of shooting the film. You can use
videos, stills, outtakes, to publicize your film. Work with your publicist to
produce a publicity plan with a set schedule for when you will be doing
publicity work. That way you can plan your film production schedule accordingly. |
Distributing a Film
Getting a film released in theaters across the country is a complex business,
but the trend has been toward self-distribution through limited theatrical or
platform release. "A platform release is a type of limited release strategy,
whereby a film opens in fewer theaters (typically 599 or less) than a wide
release. If the film receives positive word of mouth, then it is gradually
expanded to more theaters as the marketing campaign gains momentum" (from
Wikipedia). The other option for broad distribution is to "four wall" your film,
wherein a studio or distributor rents movie theaters for a period of time and
receives all of the box office revenue. The distribution strategy is described
in the business plan that you develop to attract investors. It details the
number of theaters that will show your film, the number of cities in which your
film will be shown, and other details, and it is intended to create value for
your product. It sets the agreement for disposition of box office receipts. |
Film Festival Planning
Creating a Film Festival Strategy is an important part of
marketing your film. It should detail your goals for the
film, and define the intended audience for your work. You
should consider the different tiers of the film festival
world to determine which festivals you should apply for. You
need to learn the cycle of the film festival circuit. You
need to figure out which types of films are benefited by
exposure in which types of festivals. Some film festivals
may require that you pay to play. Is that right for you? You
need to have a publicity plan for your festival
distributions, as well as film materials. You may also need
a plan for collecting assets.
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Writing Comedy
Concept, structure, voice and timing are pretty much at the core of all
writing, but nowhere is the synchronization of those elements as critical as it
is in writing comedy. You must master beats and breaks and accurately read an
audience that isn't even there to provide clues. You need to create memorable
characters in situations that hit on resonating themes. The best characters are
torn by opposing goals and forces within themselves - their inner struggles. You
must tell their stories through a cleverly orchestrated stream of jokes, and
they have to be of the right kind, and of a tone consistent with the broader
work. Is it any wonder you don't read more funny scripts? Once you have mastered
the nuances of this most difficult form, you must sell your product on the
strength of a compelling one-sentence pitch - the logline - that makes producers
want to read your script. |
Developing Material that Will Sell
Creative types often hate that their success is ultimately a business thing,
but it explains why you sometimes find successful filmmakers who aren't
creatives. People who want to develop a film idea and attract production
companies and distributors think in terms of what material they might be able to
elevate to develop a marketable product. You can film an original screenplay, or
you can adapt a screen version of another work. Whatever you think you can sell,
you need to consider your concept and ideas and determine if you have television
or movie material. You need to sell your product just as you would in any other
business, emphasizing why yours is different, more inventive. You should develop
character worksheets that trace the arc of their storylines, especially if you
are doing an episodic TV idea. You will need a dynamic synopsis of your story.
You either need an idea of which network is best for your show, or if you are
making a movie, which producer. Filmmakers estimate a budget for the film and
consider the types of films that various production companies have developed.
You will need examples of comparable works, because that works best to convey
familiar ideas to prospective partners. Develop your pitch. |
Managers and Agents
Both of these professional types can be important to the
success of a screenwriter, depending upon where the writer
is at in his or her career. Agents tend to be more
deal-oriented and are not very involved with product
development. Managers tend to be more career-oriented and
involved. They are different animals from a legal
standpoint. Agents are governed by labor law in the state in
which they do business. Literary agencies are permitted, by
law, to procure employment (i.e., writing assignments) for
their clients for a fee. Managers, conversely, are not
governed by state labor laws and, consequently, are not
permitted to procure employment for their clients for a fee.
What they do, according to Marc Hernandez, Managing Partner
and Literary Manager with the Crescendo Entertainment Group
in Los Angeles, is sell screenplays (and treatments,
pitches, and ideas); submit material to executives,
directors and talent, and facilitate meetings; and introduce
clients to attorneys, agents (managers can be more effective
at getting a client an agent than a client submitting
directly), financiers, and publicists. Agents and managers
cover the town (for their clients) for information, take
spec screenplays and pitches out to the market, and submit
material to production company and studio executives (which
can lead to selling a screenplay or obtaining a writing
assignment).
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Turning Your Screenplay Into a Novel and a Movie
Recently Jeff Lyons, an instructor through Stanford
University's Online Writer’s Studio and the University of California at
Riverside's Extension Program, used his Stage 32 blog to offer insights
into turning a novel into a screenplay. Here are some key points:
"Screenwriters are adapting their screenplays to
novels, so that they can attract producers to option them for film/TV
development," says Lyons. "Rather than writing the book first, then
optioning to a production company and then writing the screenplay based
on the book, the trend now is script first, then the book, then the
option sale and then a rewrite or full-on purchase of the original
script that started the process. In many ways, the old model of
adaptation has been turned on its head."
WRITE DEEPER: "Prose
is all about language, the written word, the musicality and rhythm of
the sentence, paragraph and chapter. Novelists write to be read, because
people read books for the joy of reading. Readers don’t have to; they
actually want to. So, language rules, but story is also critical. Unlike
with screenplays, novels are the final product and so the writing
process is as important as story development.
There are many novels with weak or non-existent
stories that captivate readers solely on the power of the written word
(In Search of Lost Time, Marcel Proust; Lectures in America, Gertrude
Stein). That would never happen with a screenplay; having a weak, or
worse, no story, equals an immediate 'pass' in any reading scenario. So,
the mantra for novelists is: show, don’t tell, but don’t worry about
telling a lot, exposition is your friend. You have no limits, so write,
write, write, go deep, go long and leave no emotional stone unturned.
'Story real estate' is literally unlimited."
EXPAND YOUR POV:
"Screenwriters have one POV, one tense and a limited flexibility in
narrative voice through dialogue, helped out occasionally by stylistic
or colorful exposition. Novelists have at least five POVs, two tenses
and unlimited flexibility with voice. How does a screenwriter adapt to
all this flexibility when they are trained to keep things contained in
one POV, one tense and limited voice? Once again, it is all in the
writing. You have to play with all of these options to see what works
for the story and this takes time and effort. Even novelists struggle
with POV and tense. It is not unusual for novelists to write a book once
in one POV/tense and then do a rewrite of the entire book changing both
POV and tense."
SUBPLOTS AND
SUPORTING CHARACTERS: "Coming up with two, three, or four
sub-stories from your screenplay that only tells one major storyline can
be nerve-racking and intimidating, but this hurdle must be traversed if
your screenplay is going to support a three or four-hundred page
narrative, but, don’t despair, subplots will always suggest themselves
in the screenplay; so, look to key supporting characters and let your
imagination run by giving them their own stories within the story."
NARRATIVE SCOPE:
"The same is true moving from script to novel. The screenplay’s premise
will almost always have to be reinvented to build in the main subplots,
new action lines and more complex story elements. The knee jerk is to
use the script as a great outline for the book, for example, follow the
script’s story beats and all will be well. This almost never works. If
you do not go into the adaptation process with a mindset that you will
have to retool your story from the ground up, then you may be setting
yourself up for major struggles down the development road. Turning a
script into a novel is not just about adding words and expanding scenes,
it’s about adding the right words and expanding the right scenes."
EXPOSITION:
"Novels allow for far more telling than showing.
This is hard for screenwriters because the script development process
rejects long exposition and anything that is not visual on the page.
Learning how to use exposition requires a whole, new mindset on the part
of the writer that says, 'exposition is your friend'. For most novelists
trying to write screenplays, one of the telltale signs that the writer
is a novelist is that their exposition tends to be many paragraphs
long—kiss of death for any screenplay.
In contrast, for many screenwriters trying to write
prose, the opposite is true; exposition tends to be short, curt, stunted
and in sentence fragments. Once again, for the screenwriter attempting
to make this mind shift, the solution is not some simplistic strategy of
writing in complete sentences and adding more words for the sake of
volume. The key to success is learning how to leverage all the 'story
real estate' by going deeper into the motivations of your characters,
finding lyrical and even musical ways of describing the story world and
luxuriating in writing that fills in the expositional holes of the
story, but doing so organically, using just the right amount of words:
no more, no less. The two main potholes waiting for you here are:
rambling, overly detailed descriptions and purple prose (extravagant or
ornate prose that breaks the narrative flow and screams, "Isn’t my
writing clever?"). "
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